je dois raconter mes vacances en anglais. J'ai fait un petit text vous pouriez le corriger ( je suis tres tres nul en anglais :) ) URGENT pour lundi merci d'ava
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je dois raconter mes vacances en anglais. J'ai fait un petit text vous pouriez le corriger ( je suis tres tres nul en anglais :) ) URGENT pour lundi merci d'avance .
During my vacation I am going to stay at home
I did my homework and I slept.
I did a lot of skating.
I go to sleep at a friend and I feast hallowenn
During my vacation I am going to stay at home
I did my homework and I slept.
I did a lot of skating.
I go to sleep at a friend and I feast hallowenn
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse vmkay
Si c'est au passé c'est:
stayed home
went to sleep at a friend's house
celebrated Halloween (feast veut dire festin) -
2. Réponse Destiny
Alors, ton texte est très mal rédigé. Je vais t'aider un petit peu, du moins ce que je peux faire.
During these holidays, I stayed at home. I did my homework, in advance. I slept, much, to be able to catch the nights where I remained awake to revise my lessons. I did a lot of skating with my friends. The day of Halloween, i enjoyed dressing up and ask for candies. I also slept at my friend's. It was pretty fun!